Script - draft 2


Location

Video

Audio

Bedroom



















A pair of straighteners are resting on a stool; the ready light starts flashing.


Boy X sits on a stool and begins on his hair.


Boy X stands up. He walks over to a windowsill, picks up a little metal box and opens it. He takes out money.


He puts the money in to a wallet.


The wallet is put in to an open bag and zips it up.


He puts on his jacket and zips it up.


Standing behind the door, boy X lifts his head and sighs; he puts his headphones in.


He turns the volume up on his iPod.


Straighteners bleep.



Silence.



 Clang of metal.




 Silence.


Zip being done up.



Zip being done up.


Deep sigh.



Muffled sound of heavy drumming music.


Hallway




Boy X walks down the stairs, throws his bag on the floor and goes towards the kitchen.


Bag hits the floor.




Kitchen













Boy X picks up a bowl, puts in the cereal and starts eating.


Boy X leans against the work surface; brother and father sit at the table eating cereal, reading papers, and chatting.


Boy Y gets up and leaves; Boy X puts his bowl on the work surface and leaves.


Shakes of cereal box; milk being poured.



Turning of pages and quite chats.




A chair creaks and scrapes against the floor; spoons clang against a bowl.


Hallway




Both boys pick up their bags; Boy Y opens the door and exits. Boy X follows and closes the door behind him.


Door unlocks; door slams shut.




Driveway 

A group of boys wait at the edge of a driveway. Boy Y leaves with them.


Boy X watches them disappear down the road; he looks around; stands still.


Boy X crosses the road; walks down an alleyway opposite into the distance.


Quite chats.


  
Diegetic sound of the street/ outdoors.



Footsteps; diegetic sound of the street/ outdoors.

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