Location | Video | Audio |
Bedroom | A pair of straighteners are resting on a stool; the ready light starts flashing. Boy X sits on a stool and begins on his hair. Boy X stands up. He walks over to a windowsill, picks up a little metal box and opens it. He takes out money. He puts the money in to a wallet. The wallet is put in to an open bag and zips it up. He puts on his jacket and zips it up. Standing behind the door, boy X lifts his head and sighs; he puts his headphones in. He turns the volume up on his iPod. | Straighteners bleep. Silence. Zip being done up. Zip being done up. Deep sigh. Muffled sound of heavy drumming music. |
Hallway | Boy X walks down the stairs, throws his bag on the floor and goes towards the kitchen. | Bag hits the floor. |
Kitchen | Boy X picks up a bowl, puts in the cereal and starts eating. Boy X leans against the work surface; brother and father sit at the table eating cereal, reading papers, and chatting. Boy Y gets up and leaves; Boy X puts his bowl on the work surface and leaves. | Shakes of cereal box; milk being poured. Turning of pages and quite chats. A chair creaks and scrapes against the floor; spoons clang against a bowl. |
Hallway | Both boys pick up their bags; Boy Y opens the door and exits. Boy X follows and closes the door behind him. | Door unlocks; door slams shut. |
Driveway | A group of boys wait at the edge of a driveway. Boy Y leaves with them. Boy X watches them disappear down the road; he looks around; stands still. Boy X crosses the road; walks down an alleyway opposite into the distance. | Quite chats. Diegetic sound of the street/ outdoors. Footsteps; diegetic sound of the street/ outdoors. |
Script - draft 2
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